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Terry Tesla

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Made this character a while ago for a speed painting, its basically a cookie cutter of my style :S still though, tried to make the face a lil different, went with a spumco style girl face.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Over all I thin this is a great piece. I especially love the the design on the boots. She has great movement and great Booty. Her energy is electrifying.

In terms of originality I the costume reminds me a bit of a turquoise version of Ulala from space channel 5. She would make a cool character for her to battle in a dance off. I love that game.

The main thing I would critique is the arms. Remember that silhouette is very important for communication. You want viewers to know what is going on and love it. You don't want them to have to guess about anything. That being said I would pull the elbow of the arm facing the viewer back some. It also would give even more movement to the great movement you already have in the drawing. Right now I think the foreshortening makes it look like she has a little art at first glance.

I know you did it because you want to show off the jet pack, but you can always do another pose to show off that element.

Anyway, thanks so much for all the great comments. I hope the critique was ok. Talk to you soon!