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Made this character a while ago for a speed painting, its basically a cookie cutter of my style :S still though, tried to make the face a lil different, went with a spumco style girl face.
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 Space chick... hawt.
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Anyway - one of my thoughts about this is she feels unbalanced. The booty and the large boots don't match the smaller-feeling top half of her body. thanks for the critique, Jesse! I agree, I think she needs some gauntletts and shoulder pads to match her boots, BUT the booty stays
  Can't see the crits for some reason. Anyway I wanted to make a comment about the arm in the foreground. Not so much having to bring it back but the foreshortening is way off. It makes her look like she has a 14 inch forearm but a 2 inch upper arm. You could pull it back more and , if you want balance I guess, make the jet pack bigger.
Also I'd probably avoid having her turn on the jet pack...since it seems upside down  -- "Sounds 'bout right" lol, i guess i had to activate it, and i only got one critique, i dont get many hits
 yeah, i agree on the arm comment, i had a different arm originally, and i couldnt make it work so I finally gave up and just did a quick one directly in photoshop, bad idea to just tack something on. lol, as for the jetpack, its not a jetpack, its supposed to be a cartoony battery  i need to convey that better on future versions of her. thank you much for the critique! this is a really great drawing. Nice work
  thank you much
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Critiques
In terms of originality I the costume reminds me a bit of a turquoise version of Ulala from space channel 5. She would make a cool character for her to battle in a dance off. I love that game.
The main thing I would critique is the arms. Remember that silhouette is very important for communication. You want viewers to know what is going on and love it. You don't want them to have to guess about anything. That being said I would pull the elbow of the arm facing the viewer back some. It also would give even more movement to the great movement you already have in the drawing. Right now I think the foreshortening makes it look like she has a little art at first glance.
I know you did it because you want to show off the jet pack, but you can always do another pose to show off that element.
Anyway, thanks so much for all the great comments. I hope the critique was ok. Talk to you soon!
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